It's been a long time since I've written a summary, and my hands are a little raw, lol.
The fourth part of "Emperor" mainly has two meanings, one is the last words of the former "First City" emperor Aurey, which is also the main task of the "Old Tune Group", and the other is to refer to "power", which refers to the change of rights in the "First City".
In addition, I am also trying to write different characters representing different instruments, they come from all directions, converge into the most intense movement, and then go away one by one, leaving only the instruments representing the protagonist to pull out the aftersound and render the feeling of loneliness.
This way of writing inevitably requires new characters, good shaping, and progressive character levels of the original characters.
For this reason, I wrote about the arrogant "priest", General Phokas with a lion appearance and a fox with a fox's heart, Zenaga with compassion, Galoran who is at ease with circumstances, Gaius who is ambitious, Asus who indulges in desire, Zendo who forgets himself for his hometown, and so on.
At the same time, Xiaohong ignited her courage, Lao Han understood the meaning of her lover, Xiaobai's complete presentation of the past and her current determination, Dabai began to face her fears, Shang Jianyao took another solid step on the road of mental illness, and Lao Ge slowly touched the meaning of the word emotional intelligence.
At this point, the self-feeling still achieves the intended purpose.
The main problem lies in six points:
First, when I first arrived in a big place, and it was a place for long-term activities, I was always accustomed to cutting in from some corners to show the characters here, the cultural customs here, and then bring out the characters little by little, outlining the events little by little, which led to a relatively slow pace in the early stage, and for some friends, the reading experience may not be very good.
The second is also a matter of rhythm, I said in this book that there are upgrades, but I will try to weaken the help of upgrades to the rhythm, so in the whole one, Shang Jianyao has only improved once, from the perspective of readers who expect him to become stronger and expect more changes, this rhythm is indeed not very friendly. To this end, when I first set it up, I made "props" similar to magical items, hoping to reflect the changes through the acquisition and consumption of items, so that the focus of the story can be more focused on the advancement of the plot.
The third is fighting, how to say it, every fight involving the Awakened consumes my brain power, more difficult than writing fists, feet, Taoist magic, etc., so it is easy to be polarized: when certain abilities first appear, in order not to make everyone confused, they will definitely explain it completely, and the fight will seem verbose and suitable for watching in one go, and I don't have the ability to write so much in one go; When certain abilities have appeared for the second or even third time, and the focus is on the battle of wits and courage, the effect is not bad, it is both fun and intense.
Fourth, the lack of tension, when no one has died in the main characters, the tension of the story is indeed a bit difficult to create, and without tension, it is not exciting enough, and there can be no big climax. I will try to use "failure" to create a corresponding atmosphere in the future, that is, not every task can be successful.
Fifth, the power change in "The First City" is because the protagonist group is just playing soy sauce on the edge, so I use it more as a stage to lead out more deeper secrets and shape the characters, rather than a trigger point for climax, which forms a certain misalignment with the reader's expectations.
Sixth, it dragged on some suspense settings for too long, resulting in a shocking feeling when decrypting.
The above is a summary of the fourth part, the fifth part is "Heroes", named after Beethoven's Third Symphony, from the name, you should be able to guess that the fifth part will have content related to the "Salvation Army".
Well, today is Saturday, it's already one watch, so it doesn't count, please Sunday, Monday, Tuesday and Wednesday morning, a total of three and a half days, and resume the update at 7 pm next Wednesday.
If you think about it carefully, I was supposed to take half a day off on Sunday, but it turned out to be included in the total leave, which is equivalent to only three days off. (Mr. Ma's face)
Fortunately, since a single chapter has been issued, wouldn't it be a waste not to ask for tickets?
Ask for a monthly pass!
(End of this chapter)