Originally, there were only two stages of polishing and perfection, because some book friends in the background had asked me before, so I showed the progress, and then everyone came to me to give their opinions, thinking that this would be even worse, so they canceled the overly specific statement of 10% and 20%, and changed it to small and large, complete.
2. Changed the appearance of Chen Yin of the Chen Family Purple Mansion.
He appeared once before writing about a middle-aged man, but now his appearance is described as an old man.
Because from the perspective of the timeline, the time to achieve the Purple Mansion needs to be relatively late, and the psychological state belongs to old age, so as not to encounter some major events, make some changes to the appearance, and avoid misunderstandings in the later plot.
3. Ju ○ Xi was the second generation during the Civil War, and the several Buddhist cultivations he participated in have made progress after the battle between the north and south, and after so many years, he has now practiced to the third generation, so of course I forgot to explain it when I fought for the first time, and I apologize here, these sheets actually did not mention that he was the second generation, nor did I mention the situation of modifications after the second generation? ? ^??
Because during this time, I am more diligent than before, and I am also working hard to adjust and update the number of words, so sometimes there will be mistakes, generally speaking, the changes are changed later, and the previous ones are rarely changed, such as Kui Qi's cultivation errors, which are also changed on the same day, and have not been said and have been changed in the front, because of the system problems at the starting point, the previous range modification may cause the chapter to be blocked, or prompt the modification failure.
And some of the previous typos mentioned by everyone have not been changed, which is also the reason, I can only change part of it every day, and if I change too much, I will be warned to change the chapter frequently. ^?? Thank you for your support~
Then on the other hand, in terms of character design, some book friends suggested to me in the background that there were too many big events, let Ximing retreat and jump the timeline to repair a few magical powers and then come out (ó_ò?), by the way, let the Li family cultivate themselves, and also skip the scene in the middle, but considering the limitations of the family in this book, once the timeline of decades has jumped, I don't know how many generations have been written down, so I still can't refer to this opinion in this regard.
At this point, since Xijun has been reincarnated, he also has his own life path to take, not to say that he has served the Li family in his second life like an ideological outline, but he has a talisman, and he still remembers his brothers and elders in his heart, and there will definitely be his plot in the future, I wish him and the Li family to meet at the peak.
Thank you for your support, I can't contact me, if you have any relevant opinions to chat privately about the operation, I will watch it for reference? ? ^??